We made an improvement to this image by framing Charlie so he was on the far left and Ben so he was on the right. The reason this is an improvement as it is obeying the rule of thirds, where as the previous image positioned them more central in the frame. In this image we also cut out more of Charlie out, so it was obvious what the main focus was. Theres also an eye line match, as by showing the angle of Charlie's head we can see he is looking back at ben.
We did a similar change to this image as the previous one, but in this image Charlie is positioned slightly lower angled as in the situation Ben's character is remaining slightly stubborn. We also made sure the focus was out on the two right figures as they're not as significant in the shot.
This image has been improved as Ben's head was positioned in the middle of the frame rather then the side which unintentionally disobeys the rule of thirds. Also this shot is a closer shot giving greater enthisis on his face.This image could still be improved by removing the black wire from the right corner, as this distracts from the main composition.
This image is effective as it includes leading lines towards the two main protagonists. The image we previously took centred the characters which disobeyed the rule of thirds, so this time round we positioned them slightly to the left, allowing more of the wall to be shown, which adds greater depth.
Similar to the image above, this photo was previously framed so the characters where central; so to improve it we brought them to the left. This then allows (when shooting) us to see the depth of the locker corridor and also the amount of pupils attending Merriweather Academy.
This shot is the one we've changed the most, as previously it was a high angled shot looking down on the bag, but we found it more appropriate to change it to a low angled shot so we can see more clearly the back drop to the ground. Although the feet are positioned in the middle, the bag is to the right; to make this better we could have framed the feet so they were more to the left, although we have made a slight improvement as previously both the feet and the bag were central.
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